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male perspective on the female of the species
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male perspective on the female of the species |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Her thoughts bulldozed my skin A thousand needles strong Her desires leveled my soul Desolate landscape, scattered mortar Her needs ravaged my body Shivering sinew, aching ash Her mind pierced my skull Fierce intensity, molten lava Her sadness crumbled my defenses Frail fragments, gossamer thin Her resolve strengthened mine Never to pine in forgotten fields Her recovery presaged mine Phoenix like, sun seeking Her future stretches forth Restless wings, dreams unfulfilled My future mirrors hers Treading the path of infinite shroud Do answers lurk in distant galaxies Answers manifest in impromptu impulse. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good,juanita! The male and female are so different! And gladly so! ------------------ Denise |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Good read...I enjoyed this one  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
Male and Female species always a mystery to be solved. Thank you Denise. I'm glad you enjoyed it Caroline, I'm also glad that as a woman I don't think more like a man, with all due respect to Prof. Higgins. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Very good read juanita...was very intense in wording and well put together. Loved it. ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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