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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

0 posted 1999-09-13 11:34 AM

Lovers Crown

Walking along this country side
The warm wind through my hair
I've come from far and wide
To end this love affair.
I take you for a stroll
Through these evergreen fields
I pour out, my heart and soul
Only wanting to be healed.

Your hand in mine, a tear drops down
As I resign the lovers crown.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 09-13-99).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

1 posted 1999-09-13 01:00 PM

Girl, this is sad, but yet very beautiful!

I know how you must feel!!! ((((HUGS))))

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-09-13 01:33 PM

Soul-sister, I feel for you and with you. (hugs)

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

[This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-13-99).]

HCwildchild
Member

since 1999-09-03

Posts 55
Pennsylvania,USA

3 posted 1999-09-13 03:11 PM

That was beautiful

You have such talent! Keep up the good work

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Heather C.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

4 posted 1999-09-13 05:18 PM

This is so beautiful and sad.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 1999-09-13 05:22 PM

WhtDove, thank you for your lovely comment and thank you for listening

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-09-13 05:23 PM

Dream,Thank you so much for everything

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 1999-09-13 05:24 PM

HC and JennyLee, I thank you both for your lovley comments

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

8 posted 1999-09-13 05:52 PM

Hey D.A. any time! Hope things look up for ya soon Hon!!!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 1999-09-14 09:10 AM

Very nicely written Dark angel.

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 1999-09-14 05:37 PM

hoot, Thank you so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

11 posted 1999-09-14 06:25 PM

Beautifully written and so sad. I hate goodbyes..

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 1999-09-16 02:21 AM

Isis, I hate goodbye's too, Thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

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