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Open Poetry #2

What one can do.

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

0 posted 1999-09-13 09:05 PM

I run through the feilds.
Naked.
No exterior host or inhibitions.
My soul exposed.
I marvel at the world.
Looking through rose glasses it refreshing.
An innocence lost, I have found.
A delight in being vulnerable.
Not a delight the sadistic get from the fear of losing.
But the ecstacy of knowing you won't let go.
That I'm safe with you.

Thank you for releasing me.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-14 09:18 AM

Oh my, I can not believe no one has replied to this piece. It is absolutely beautiful. I almost missed it as it got bumped back to the second page before I got a chance to read it. Would have been my loss indeed. Here's a bump back up so others can enjoy

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 1999-09-14 10:48 AM

Thanks for bumping it back Hoot ! I almost missed it likewise, and am surely glad I did not for I am a fellow naked runner!! I even have a poem titled..."RUN NAKED".....it got lost in oblivion when we lost our other forum # 1 , but regardless, I know the feeling !!! What a fabulous piece you have here!! Thanks for sharing...glad I caught it !

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

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