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Open Poetry #2

Sing me a Song Please

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-13 11:16 AM

sing me a song please,
time is not my lease,
im so glad your here,
so you can stop my tears,
im getting cold love,
dont try to stop the blood,
im done,im over,
just hold me a little while longer,
no beautiful i wont get stronger,
im through,
my windows are blue,
sadness is not new in my house,
you made it go away,
but its back today,
and brought death with it,
my wheels are slowing down,
visons blurred,
please say the words,
no sweetie i love you more,
so open the door,
let death through,
one day i promise it will be just me and you,
but for now,
i throw in the towel,
dont cry,
ill be back,
after death gets off my back,
cheer up find love,
wash your hands of my blood,
swear to me you will try,
before i die,
thank you,
you did all you could do,
but im through,
i always loved you

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poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-09-14 09:02 AM

This is absolutely heart-wrenching!! Tell me please that this is not how you truly feel right now !! How terribly sad, but you know, I think we've all felt this low before...believe it or not, you may feel like you're dying but there is a tomorrow....just wake up to see it. My hope I give to you - - **blowing kisses

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-09-14 09:57 AM

So truly sad....it touches my heart

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"This world is not conclusion.
A sequel stands beyond,
Invisable as music,
But positive as sound."
~Emily Dickinson

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-09-14 10:11 AM

Tis so sad....

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