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Open Poetry #2

Shall I Adore Thee

Loneheart
Member

since 1999-09-13

Posts 92
Eastern US

0 posted 1999-09-13 07:53 PM

Shall I Adore Thee
In my dreams, you engulf my nights and days with gentle glimpses of your face embedded deep within my mind.
I am thy prisoner my love as I imagine the gentle touch
Of your sweet breathe caressing my soul like no other before thee.
A gentle breath, blowing, to quench the flaming fire that you ignite within me.
My heart asks pleasure of thee oh wondrous Rose that I shall ask of no other save thee.

Hearken unto my heart maiden of my soul for this day I ask of thee
To Be my eternity, my world if it please thee But not a short time I beg of thee fair maiden But until time is no more.
Ye alone shall hold the key that unleashes my passions,
Mine eyes shall see none other but thee,
My lips shall taste only thine,
Mine arms shall hold and caress only thee,
Ye alone shall quench the fire that burns within my soul.
With all the passions of the Gods, shall I please thee my love.

Written by LBS
a.k.a.
Loneheart

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-13 08:32 PM

WOW! I love this one too! Very well done!

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Denise

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

2 posted 1999-09-16 11:55 PM

A passionate Knight and soul of old! :

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

3 posted 1999-09-17 02:20 AM

Oh yeah, lonehaeart...please me, adore me....
I am pretty good at quenchining fires! ;-)
Great poem, my friend, love the chivalry expressed...full of tenderness and honor..gotta love that in a man!

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"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?"
--John Keating, Dead Poets Society

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