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Seaangel
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand

0 posted 1999-09-01 11:37 PM


I say that I will die
but do not realise the day;
that whether fifty, eighty,
or nineteen,
I will stop
being
here
& never come back.
I want, therefore, to love you
before I leave.

© Copyright 1999 Angela King - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-02 02:10 AM


Very sweet, dear.
miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
2 posted 1999-09-07 01:10 PM


short but to the point
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-07 06:14 PM


Not a wasted word and eloquently stated

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Seaangel
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167
Auckland, New Zealand
4 posted 1999-09-12 03:56 AM


Severn, Miriam, hoot, thank you!!! I wasn't sure if it was long enough to convey my meaning... I am glad you enjoyed it!
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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5 posted 1999-09-12 02:20 PM


Very sweet! The message was conveyed very well! Sometimes the short ones are the most powerful!

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Denise

Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
6 posted 1999-09-17 04:05 AM


Live in the now, for no one knows what will come with the morrow.
Well wrought angel of the ocean...


Carpe Diem!

juanita
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA
7 posted 1999-09-17 04:48 AM


welcome Seaangel, sweet poem.
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