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Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

0 posted 1999-09-12 11:38 PM

Traffic sounds, a whisper in the trees
I realize that these
are sounds of my loneliness

tears crashing upon my hands
heart tightened with restricting bands
signs of my loneliness

a soft sigh sounds so loud
in the middle of a noisy crowd
need feeds my loneliness

wondering in my mind
if love is truly blind
distance increases my loneliness

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-12 11:51 PM

Very well done! If someone did not know what loneliness was, they certainly would after reading this! FABULOUS!!!

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Denise

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-09-13 12:38 PM

This was sad. Tears crashing upon my hands, I loved that line. Very well done!!!!!!!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-09-13 02:47 AM

Heart-rending verse, Lady deVine. I feel for you.

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Pain is life, life is short, I will endure.
DreamEvil©

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 1999-09-13 06:13 AM

Some say we always are alone.
Some say we never are.
Philosophers and Christians may,
At times, have thoughts quite far.

It's true we always are alone
At least, deep down inside.
It's true we never are alone
For that's why Jesus died.

But one can take opinions all
And stack them on the shelf.
Philosophy means little when
You wake up by yourself.

If admiration means anything, deVine one, you will never be alone.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-09-13 08:31 AM

Very sad poet...a touching piece

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"The role of the writer is not to say what we can all say, but what we are unable to say." ~Anais Nin

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

6 posted 1999-09-13 10:44 AM

beautiful, your description was so perfect,
the busy world, going on all around, but still...you feel alone.....
have a hug poet...you write for me too!

DBeth
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since 1999-09-09

Posts 110
providence,ky.42450

7 posted 1999-09-13 10:48 AM

Wondering in my mind
If love is truly blind.
Excellent poem! I love your work!

DBeth

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JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

8 posted 1999-09-13 05:16 PM

Wondering in my mind if love is truly blind.
I love your work!!
Thanks so much for sharing your talent!!!

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