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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
It was new spring and the leaves which remained from the falling time joined up and were having at their last dance invited by the wind,they had quickly accepted and dervished with abandonment, color-faded but remembering, thin,homeless tramps, the crackly old withering things, ancient corps-de-ballet, spinning and circling, in the fourth act finale- chasse' et jete',en masse- just before they would all disappear, going to someplace hidden, dissolving there... Yet they did have their legacies,each one, as witnessed by the masses of the season grasses and the lingering yet melting snows, all to soon meet their stars, mingling with them in the afterglow- behind the curtain ------------------ |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
I can see you spent time on this one and well deserved it was, more please… |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
beautiful imagery here...I like this.  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
a visual treat.....very beautifully written....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto! Well done! ------------------ Denise |
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