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Beyond Midnight |
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Buzzygirl Junior Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 42St. Paul, MN USA |
BEYOND MIDNIGHT With only a fantasy in stead for your presence Heavy breath's drawn in as I turn off the light: so keenly felt here is your absence; how should I last through the night? Out of fitful slumber, something moves And you might open one eye- But there's nothing there- no one at all Sleeping by your side. Beyond the wall of midnight And but ten small minutes away I'm cursing my adjacent empty space Then whispering your name. How can time drop so slowly? And how can clocks keep their pace When such aloneness is attested to By the tears upon my face? Pass hours, unkind; weary and weary One would think by default that I'd earned A bit of respite from this battle, But still I toss; still, I turn. So many nights I could spend with you limbs entwined in love and light I realize I'm not knowing that now and a sorrow that I must learn to fight strikes deep down as I feel almost lost And still I turn; still, I toss. Shall those hours account for the company I keep? Threatening to seize me, body and mind entire, At night these thoughts of you settle deep And overtake me with desire. -- August 24, 1999 |
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HCwildchild Member
since 1999-09-03
Posts 55Pennsylvania,USA |
This is one excellent poem, you write so beautifully  Keep up the good work, I enjoyed this one!------------------ Heather C. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, beautfiul, exellent work!! You have great talent.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely awesome! I enjoyed reading this! I'll be looking for more from you! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was Great!!! |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
I agree, well written... welcome to passions.. ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh my...I know this all too well!! You did a nice job!! Thanks!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I've shared those feelings, and all the replies as well TERRIFIC>>: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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