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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-15 12:45 PM


These Three Short and Sweet

Is it Real?

Is it Not?

Does he love her?

Does he not?

Is she living in a dream?

Is she playing make-believe?

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A shoe brand new

Sparkling to the eye

Comfortable underneath

So wonderful to be

Yet time passes by

Once new now old

No longer useful

Holes and tears

Needing love and repairs

But instead comes along

Another new shoe

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I sensed her then

I sense her now

Nothing's changed

But my mistakes

Did you think me blind?

That I could not see the love in your eyes

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-09-15 12:52 PM


Very short and sweet! I particularly like the shoe poem.
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-15 01:20 AM


Cool!! That's my favorite of the three!!

Thanks!!

Justbleu

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