He didn't win (for Rainbowgirl)

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redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-09-09 11:21 PM

He came when I was unafraid
and trusting and unaware
took the little girl life
that I would have known

He came when I was alone
and defenseless and told
me it was love
which distorted my view of that word
forever

He came when he knew
I was small and he was big
and I didn't know I could
say no

He came, yes. he came
but that was long ago

Now I'm grown and strong
and unwilling to let him in
he's not welcome in my mind
and i've pushed him out
of my soul

So.
I win.

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

1 posted 1999-09-09 11:23 PM

WOW! I love it! That's right, once you decide to take control of your life again, you don't HAVE to let him keep a piece of you.

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

2 posted 1999-09-09 11:28 PM

Thank you Tara.. now everyone of us get up and say... YEAHHHH!!!!!..

I WIN, YOU LOSE!.... and then get on with the sweet things in life.. xoxo

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-09-09 11:37 PM

Nicely done!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

4 posted 1999-09-10 12:03 PM

YEAHHHH!!!!

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

5 posted 1999-09-10 07:11 AM

Well done sweetheart...I'm proud of you! It brought tears to my eyes..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

JTF
Member

since 1999-08-09

Posts 319
France

6 posted 1999-09-10 07:16 AM

YEAAAH !!!

BIG HUGS

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-09-10 10:37 AM

Most certainly you have WON! You have won in that you don't let it destroy you. You have won, in that you got back and fought for yourself. You have truly WON! Another big,
YEAH!!!! And a big ((((HUG)))) to go with it.

Sue
Member

since 1999-08-04

Posts 383
France

8 posted 1999-09-10 05:48 PM

YOU WIN!

graham
Member

since 1999-07-31

Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England

9 posted 1999-09-12 06:18 PM

Yet again...you get right to the point! Another lovely piece of writing to keep the hope in all our hearts.

AND...for everyone else..I've met Redwriter,
and she's just as wonderful as her writing suggests...

And...13th of Sept is her BIRTHDAY...so...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU RED!!!
xoxoxooxox

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

10 posted 1999-09-12 11:00 PM

Ohhhhhh... see what you've done?? Now they know I HAVE birthdays... hahah..

thank you Graham.. and for all of you who have not met him, he's everything his writing is and so much more!

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

11 posted 1999-09-15 12:25 PM

by the way.. the clock is now going backwards... (as is all women's puragative)
(grin)

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

12 posted 1999-09-15 12:31 PM

You won!!! That is great!!! Way to go!!

Justbleu

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