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Living In Oblivion |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Look at me and tell me what you see Does it take that long to tell me things about me Do I not exist? Do I have to show my name to you on a list? You always ignore the things I do for you You are hurting me inside, but I guess you have no clue I wish you knew what I¹m feeling right now I hope that there¹s a chance for us to be closer somehow All I want from you is your trust and love Do I have to wait until the heavenly clouds fall down from above? Though I do believe that things are worth waiting for Should I wait for you even if you do not care for me anymore? You never noticed me crying with tears of sorrow Already knowing you ask for forgiveness until tomorrow Shame on me for asking for your helping hand Shame on me for thinking you could understand You shut me out of your life which is not fair All you needed to show me is your love and care ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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LiLDiZzY New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6CA, USA |
another masterpiece from truly precious! bravo! ------------------ what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you... I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you... |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =) ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
thank you lildizzy!! I just love your compliments. hehe =) ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, TrulY, I enjoyed this! So full of emotion !  ------------------ Denise |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Thank you very much snyder! I am very glad you enjoyed this poem. My friend's life was the reason why i wrote this poem. =) ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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