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DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
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providence,ky.42450

0 posted 1999-09-11 06:30 PM



Please don't cry, I heard her say.It will be fine,everythings okay.As I stopped to look at who was talking to me.My little girl said don't cry mommy.Just then I told her I was alright.I needed some sleep after crying all night.She lay down beside me,as I heard her cry.I talked to her and asked her why. I could tell she was full of fear.Rock a bye baby,Chin up my dear.

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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 1999-09-11 06:36 PM


You told me to keep my chin in my time of need. I thank you for it. Great idea to title a poem like this.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
2 posted 1999-09-11 07:13 PM


This is just so sweet. I really liked this!
Denise
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3 posted 1999-09-11 07:34 PM


Very sweet, indeed! Where would we be without our sweet little ones?!

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DBeth
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 110
providence,ky.42450
4 posted 1999-09-11 08:12 PM


Children have a way of making everything seem o.k.and making our grown up problems seem so small.Thank you all for your comments.Hugs sent your way! DBeth

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