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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183
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There was a time I held myself at fault. For the actions of others and the pain they caused. No more. I used to bite my tounge and obstain from objection, Looking only to please. No more. I hid the pain and painted the smile. "And all shall call you stolid." No more. No more will i aquiesce my identity. I am unique. No more Mr. Nice Guy. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ouch....I can truly feel the burn coming from this piece. It is one thing to regret the mistakes you have made in life, it is another thing to let them harden you. There is a fine line between building up a protective shell and building impentratable armor...I hope you've chose the first. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
Very nice! ------------------ "If to rectify your demeanor, You must imitate another, Your philosiphy on morality Is a burden on your mentality, Your actions based on popularity, Will never fulfill you internally, Cuz the world was not blessed with equality, But rather with fake geniality. --823-- |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I disagree with you, sir. You are Mr. Nice Guy....  You say some very nice things to people that need to hear them....thank you - and I also bump this one back to the top !!! I'm still searching back here in this dusty corner....for MORE !------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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beowulf_26 Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 183 |
Someone has found me out. I can't help but being a nice person. It's bred into me. The poem got rid of a lot of frustration though, very therapudic. Thank you so much to all who read my poems. It means more to me than you can ever imagine. I only hope that I toutch someone. ------------------ Opinions are like bellybuttons: eveybody's got 'em and they're good for nothing. |
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