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stoney1
Junior Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 12
Wooster, Ohio, Wayne

0 posted 1999-09-09 06:11 PM


I found someone I like alot
But distance keeps us apart
Don't try to be something I'm not
Cause it's not within my heart
I write these word's of wisdom
For it's you I'm thinking of
To spend a moment of time with you
I'd surely fall in love

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Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-09 06:58 PM


Very heartfelt.
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
2 posted 1999-09-09 08:19 PM


I've had my share of long distance relationships! Isn't that the way it always is! People are never where you need them to be! Sometimes you have to go after what you want though.....beautiful little poem you have here!

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-09-09 10:21 PM


Oh...very nice!!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-09-09 10:52 PM


Sweet little poem! I did that once, long distance. I was in love...but that didn't work, better luck to you!
redwriter1
Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480
Franklin, TN
5 posted 1999-09-09 11:07 PM


The heart knows no distance....

it only knows where it wants to be
and the love has no location
no matter how far


*** as in the lyric from country song...

There's no place that far......(smile)

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