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Some Kind of Love
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Some Kind of Love |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Some Kind Of Love My heart was sinking as my beloved was about to leave. Love is the most important object in my life, I now believe. What should I do when the one I care about disappears? How can I live when my heart is flowing with tears? When is the time to shine; will it be years? I can¹t let go of some one I truly love. For I knew long ago that you were my angel sent from above. Should I stop living in the past and think about the present time? To prove my love, should I commit a crime? Would that be worth anything just to have you as mine? Friends say that I deserve better than you. Even if I leave, my heart will be broken into two. Is our love true that no powerful force can turn it into a flame of lust? Is our love too passionate that a fire can not turn it into an ashy dust? Is our love kind, full of wonderful memories that we have so much trust? If you only knew, I loved you the most. You would not pretend as if I¹m a ghost. Why can¹t you say that we have loved each other ever since from the start? When will you admit to yourself that I¹m the one who belongs in your heart? Can¹t you see that deep inside it is tearing us apart? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Quite emotional!! Desperation, love, and loss!! So sad!! Lovely thoughts!! Justbleu  ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Thanks for those com,pliments Justbleu!! =) |
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Piccolo04 New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 13826 Amy Place |
Very, very good, I've never seen such a good poem like this before. I like how you expressed your emotion in the poem. Keep up the good work. |
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KiMee New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 1 |
I loved the poem! I can tell it came straight from your heart. Great job! hehe |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
i don't know what else to say besides WOW!!! i'm taking you back to the top. |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Thank you all so much for those wonderful comments! I am glad that you had fun reading my poem. Thank you so much again! =) ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I remember feeling this way. As the whole world is crashing down around you! You have written your thoughts well! |
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LiLDiZzY New Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6CA, USA |
i love it! i hope to see more good work from you! ------------------ what if I, keep holding on...just maybe you'll see, that I do need you... I know you probably will never love me too, but from the second I wake up I will never stop thinking about you... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad... I've known that some kind of love for years, and in the end I had to give up on it and him. Now I'm strong enough to look back fondly. You will too....one day....: ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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TrulY PreciouS Junior Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 20 |
Don't worry lildizzy! I will keep on putting my poems here and hope that you will enjoy reading my other poems as well as this one. Yes Isis... I am getting over this loss and sorrow. ------------------ Trul¥ Preciou§ "Live and Learn! Forgive and Forget! Take advantage in life coz life is short and it's only once in a lifetime!" |
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