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susieQ_luccier
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since 1999-09-09
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0 posted 1999-09-09 05:17 PM


He makes me want to run and hide,
but I need to know him deep inside.

There is something there I can not see,
Something inside him that wants to be free.

I know we share some similiar pain,
and I know by sharing it just what we'll gain.

He keeps his feelings locked away,
and if your not careful about what you say...

He'll turn and run and lock you out,
I wish i knew what that was all about.

Someday when I gain his trust and his heart is no longer torn,
A great and awesome friendship will be born.

[This message has been edited by susieQ_luccier (edited 09-09-99).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-09-09 06:47 PM


Very sad but hopeful. Very nice!

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Denise

susieQ_luccier
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since 1999-09-09
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central illinois
2 posted 1999-09-09 10:58 PM


thank you for your responce denise !
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