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To My Love
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To My Love |
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stoney1 Junior Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 12Wooster, Ohio, Wayne |
I lie in bed But cannot sleep try to control The urge to weep If it would be That we should part Forever you'll live Within my heart My love for you Is stronger now We'll be together I know not how I do know this Our love is true And in good time They'll see it too From feable mind's Come hate and lies But in our hearts True love never dies ------------------ Copyright1999 Harold Amstutz [This message has been edited by stoney1 (edited 09-09-99).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice indeed! I enjoyed this one!  ------------------ Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I like the short lines, and how they seem to "fall" down the page as you read it....very easy on the eyes.....I write like this from time to time....it's one of my favorite forms. It seems to keep the reader interested, because of it's briefness....great job again ! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Harold...very poignant piece. It is well crafted. Welcome to the group....I am looking for much more. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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