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| Open Poetry #2 |
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A moment |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
The snow fall's all around us Whiteness glows from the ground There are mounds of snow beside the walk And its still is falling down, So we cling to each other With arms wrapped around Yet the coldness we don't feel, For inside us burns a fire Filled with true love passion A yearning, a desire, One moment is all it takes For each of us to see Wrapped in your arms Is the place I long to be Cold winds blow out of the north Snow swirling in our face Our breath blowing stem to the air As we breathe fast and hard, You hold my face so tenderly And kiss my pleading lips As two are one together A moment I'll not forget © tori ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink vlh. [This message has been edited by tori (edited 09-08-99).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow Tori, this was great! I have missed you posting, I'm glad you're back. Though I am not ready for those cold North winds yet...brr! Great Job! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Tori, where have you been? Or am I the one who has been "lost?" Really nice poem here - you capture the moment well, I felt as if I were watching the exchange of romance here! My mind has been in another world for quite sometime, you'll have to excuse me if you've been here all along, and I've just failed to comment! I love your work, and was delighted to see you name "pop up" !! ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thanks WhtDove and Fatale!! you have warmed my heart with your wonderful comments.. :-) I'm not for the cold either WhtDove.. I'm a hot house plant..lol |
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