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Iloveit
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0 posted 1999-09-08 01:16 PM


look but don't touch

pretty lady, walking as
if she owns the world
a thing of beauty to behold, but
her protection has grown
entirely too thin.
don't touch
she may fall apart
tears at any moment
should have four glass walls
a barrier from the world
so they can look
but not touch
she is much
too fragile
today

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©1999 Iloveit


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Iloveit
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1 posted 1999-09-08 01:24 PM


help please, this poem is supposed to be centered, but the html that I know is not working, can someone tell me how? thanks
JTF
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since 1999-08-09
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2 posted 1999-09-08 01:49 PM


ooops, you were faster than me HFG ...

and that is another great poem ... and sad ... C&H HUGS

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Iloveit
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3 posted 1999-09-08 01:51 PM


well looks like the 5th time is a charm lol, and JTF, thanks, needed one of those today, you know C&H hugs can penetrate glass without harming the contents don't you?

hugs back

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Balladeer
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4 posted 1999-09-08 02:48 PM


This is the first thing of yours I've read and.....Iloveit!! Only good writers can make it look this simple.
Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-09-08 02:58 PM


thanks balladeer, considering the source,(all my friends here seem to just love you lol), and the poems of yours that I have read, that makes me feel pretty good
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