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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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No Dessert "Clean your plate now little girl" came the voice flushing through her mind like a swirl "No dessert till it's clean" made her design the illusion so not to create a scene. Pockets bulging no more room, stuffed some into her socks knowing one day she'd meet her doom. "Your clothes smell like someone died. What is this odor? What are you trying to hide?" Now with three children of her own she rescues those words from being duplicated like a clone. |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
cute  !!! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
LOL. I liked this, LD. I've had to launder some pretty messy kids pockets, so I identified with it. Glad you posted this.... hehehe |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very cute ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LOL! This is great! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I would like to thank all of you for your replies, I was beginning to think I could not write anymore, for my poems were getting little, or no responses. So this thanks is much stronger than I can state, cause you all have made me feel worthy of continuing. Here's a big giant {{{HUG}}} You all are special. |
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Blondie Member
since 1999-08-06
Posts 307Ohio |
wonderful work dreamer! |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Please don't ever doubt that you are worthy to continue! I'm afraid I haven't had time lately to do my bit with responses, but I like your work. Don't stop. |
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