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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-08 12:12 PM


how can i live this way
how do i make it through today
whats my motivation
to start a new day
i cant say
perhaps its hope
for something better
far more distance
less the weather
so im dangling on that storied line
praying...aching
shouting divine
wanting now to be my time..




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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-08 12:29 PM


Very good! So much emotion crammed into so few words!

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Denise

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-09-08 01:40 AM


so sad, there must be a shred of happiness in there somewhere?
There is PLENTY to motivate each and every person on this Earth.....
Smile please?

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



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