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Open Poetry #2

By and by with him

Crimson Rogue
Junior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 21

0 posted 1999-09-07 05:31 PM

By his stripes
He will wipe away my tears
With his blood
He will cleanse my hands

With his cries
He will open my mind
And with his eyes
He will tune in my ears

With his words
He will teach me to fly
By his hands
He will hold me up high

With his feet
Will he show me how to walk
With his mouth
Will he teach me how to talk

By his wings
Will he teach me how to soar
With his voice
He will show me how to sing

By his love
He will keep me forever in the sky
With his love
I will help others learn to fly

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-09-07 06:49 PM

EXCELLLENT!!!! This is indeed one of the best poems I have had the priveledge to read. You did a wonderful job here. This poem just flows and the message it gives is great. Thanks so much for posting.

Crimson Rogue
Junior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 21

2 posted 1999-09-07 08:09 PM

Thank you for the great comment. I am glad that you got a message, any message, out of this piece.

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

3 posted 1999-09-07 11:33 PM

hugs and kisses to you. out of all your poems this is my favorite one. Hope you don't mind...my mom read it...she loves you even more now!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-08 12:25 PM

Very lovely Crimson. Very inspirational!

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