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Open Poetry #2

No Turning Back

snacks
Junior Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 35
NJ

0 posted 1999-09-02 03:09 PM

She stalks the night
dress too tight
waiting for yesterday's song

Her hair is dark
she lights the spark
of every man ever, now gone.

In coloured dreams
her sorrow streams
a past can't help but be wrong.

She whispers goodbye,
can't say she didn't try.
from this, it's time to move on.

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God is seen always in a child's eyes

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-02 03:26 PM

This is very good snacks! It made me feel her sadness and lonliness.

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Denise

snacks
Junior Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 35
NJ

2 posted 1999-09-03 12:04 PM

Thanks Denise. This was actually written about a person I know who completed suicide. I am glad you sensed the sadness there. chris

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God is seen always in a child's eyes

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 1999-09-07 11:48 PM

This was very good! I missed it the first time! `Tis sad, I am sorry this happened! I sure wish they could find another way to deal with things!
Want to add here that I love your signature, so very true!

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-09-08 12:31 PM

I'm sorry to hear that snacks. I also have known people who have committed suicide. It's devastating. It's such an irreversible solution to a most often temporary problem.
How sad.

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Denise

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