Open Poetry #2 |
Biography of a Soul |
Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I was an innocent when I began, Along the way needing a helping hand. When I got older things got kinda tough, Learnin' so much is kinda rough. Then there was others, a voice said, like me, But it was only differences I could see. It said, look beyond the cover and I promise you will find your brother. I did what it said and removed the masks, to find real love, finally at last. The moral of this story is... no matter who you are, even if you've traveled far, or the wisdom of a thousand aces, You will find yourself in all those faces. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice Julie and nice message too! ------------------ Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Very interesting thought you portrayed here! Nice piece, really enjoyed the message and the nice form of the poem. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Thank you d.s. & pff: This one took on a life of it's own. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
yep, nice message... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Good message Julie ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Thanks for the read/comments, Hoot and Moonmoon. I don't believe we've met Moonmoon. Nice to extend my circle. This is truly a magnificent place! ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Nice poem this message of truth. |
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