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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-09-06 08:29 PM


Give me your heart,
For I will carry it!
Give me your soul,
I will heal it!
Give unto me your life,
for I will make it happy.
I can be all things to you,
If you would just let me.
Give me your truthfullness,
I will honor it.
Give me your honesty and what remains
of it.
Give me your hand, I will walk with you,
beside you , every step of the way.
Lead me to your dreams, show me what
you are made of,
Let me come inside the wonderous person you are,
comfort me, love me, show me appreciation and attention,
Thats all I ask of you,
Give me all of you and together our souls will be entwined forever!

© Copyright 1999 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-06 08:40 PM


Beautifully done Romantic...indeed very romantic. Welcome to the group

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 1999-09-06 08:46 PM


Thank you Hoot! and thanks for the welcome!I think that all poems of poetry are beautiful because they express what the soul andheart is feeling!
Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 1999-09-15 06:56 PM


Another lovely piece!!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
4 posted 1999-09-15 08:06 PM


*sigh*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


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