Open Poetry #2 |
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Just Call Me Friend |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston ![]() |
Some call me Dew, short for Dewmesoft my poet name you know. No matter what you call me by true friendships start to grow. So many verses you have seen some touch you deep inside. Others show my humor its a safe place I can hide. Though people think they know me and can spot me in a crowd. There’s pain I share with no one where others aren’t allowed. I have to have a safe place somewhere to call my own. Where I can keep my deepest thoughts, where I can be alone. I go there when I’m lonely or sad and feeling blue. I bet you have the same place way down inside of you. I try not to visit often its best to stay away. I’d rather just be happy, keep laughter in my day. For every poem I write of pain 3 more with humor come. I find it keeps me balanced and its just a lot more fun. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whether expressing pain or humor is your need Your poems are always well worth the read! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I dig that sentiment. Nice rhyme... liked the way it flowed. Thanks for sharing this bit of you. ![]() |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
if writing three humor poems for every painful poem is your own remedy, then do what you gotta do. Either way, I enjoy your poems very much. |
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'll call you "friend", Lucie, if you'll call me the same! I am always glad to read your poetry. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lucie:..I think a few of us hide in our humour and somehow when we want to cry or if we can find a smile or someone makes us laughs, the shadows seem a little less bewildering... Big HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do have such a place...that is only mine!! I liked that!! Justbleu ![]() ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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Mr. Cucumber Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 18 |
Well, Lucie. I hope that secret place isn't out in the vegetable garden. yanno, we get a lot of that stuff out here. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lucie well stated! I think each of us has a place to hide! But I don't think everyone can come back with humor. It's a good thing to bounce back with! |
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