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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Deep Blue eyes Piercing deep into her soul Knowing without a doubt Gentle smile Natural connection of two lost creatures Brought to one Scorpion and Fish Perfect fit Very strange The first kiss Being young Nervous awkwardness causes doubt Questioning fate he turns away leaving her numb and cold Something snaps from holding back A loss for words to reassure him to take a second look A haunting connection draws him near But he turns again in fear ------------------ "Never let anyone keep you from your dreams, follow your heart, be true to yourself, and if that special someone does to, go ahead, walk together side by side as one!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, Justbleu, but probably true for a lot of young ones! (older ones too!) ------------------ Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Yep!!  Thanks |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I must agree with Denise.....sad...and true....and well written.  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 09-15-99).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You, Thank You Balladeer!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Justbleu, Your style had me for a while but if Balladeer likes it too and he to I my Garu. Then be safe to know it is so. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Just great Justbleu, but why can't they face their realities, hard or as frightening as they may seem, they chose to take the easier way out...so useless. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I really am not sure...that poem is my oldest!! I think I wrote that in 93 for my friend!! We are still very good friends!! Thanks soo much!! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Another lovely one from you, Justbleu. Caught the images very well. |
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