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Something Beautiful and Breath-taking...
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Something Beautiful and Breath-taking... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Something beautiful and breath-taking To mellow out your soul... Something heart-warming and relaxing has now become my goal... You want beauty from these words of mine- Sit back and close your eyes. I’ll entice you with my sweetest wine And promise no more lies... The fresh scent of newly cut grass and the rose-colored times in the sunrise is where I am. My paper is made of stardust. My pen, a magic wand. And I float about in fancy-free moments upon a pink, cotton-candy-like cloud. I hover above cities made up of tiny stars and planets. I surf over oceans, petting Orca’s back. And slowly, I find a sunset melting away In to the sky... So many, many muses... Candlelight and Romance... Fire, burning embers and kisses On a clear, starry night- fireflies in flight... and crickets in symphony... Mountains and Crystal lakes... The comfort of the cool, crisp air... And a pair of Lover’s Arms entangled... Ah, but then the Voice of the Song takes up my senses... I fly through half notes, whole notes, Rests and G-Clefs... Humming tunes that I touch freely... Up and Down, To and Fro... My song becomes a dance upon a checkered ballroom floor... And I am wearing an elegant night-dress, Like a princess or a queen... Stepping and swaying under moonlight, In love, I turn in to your face And on through my muses... Past my children’s laughter and into their eyes- Right in that starry sparkle past their lashes... And then through a Darkness I fly toward a Light- Warm and inviting... loving and accepting... gentle and kind... Your love for me- Something beautiful and breath-taking. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o man tiz inspirational and beeyoutiful thanx one for the pickmeup |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
This is a dream, one voice - I was lost in it. What a creation. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I could actually hear the tune, as you dance on the checkered ballroom floor. This is so beautiful  Thanks ~One Voice~ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanks all of you... I enjoyed writing it... ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you for reposting this poem you wrote for me, dear. It truly lives up to it's title. ------------------ Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive. DreamEvil© |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This was extremly brilliant in the way you played it out. Your thoughts were marvelous, I am in awe over this one. Thanks for shinning this one onto to us. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
One Voice~ For one voice you did very well. Let me help you and ring its bell. Good job. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Dream: You're very welcome! It was my pleasure! Lost Dreamer and Seymour Tabin: Thank you very much for your kind words of praise! I appreciate your support of my work! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! great imagery! |
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