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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I am but one voice drowned in a crowd full of songs. I have but one fragile heart that has had its share of breaking. I live but one life that tip-toes down a busy road. And if there be but one life, one heart that I may touch so deeply, My one voice shall resound voluminous melodies inside my soul. I am but one voice. I am a woman, phenomenally. I can be one rainmaker. I can make rainbows, too. I can open wounds, pour salt inside- And my kisses can heal. My words can breed to millions, But I speak them with only my one voice. I can be a sorceress of emotion, Casting spells over your heart, Lighting flames eternally. Once my voice has kissed your ear, I'll never leave your soul, Staining your memory, Never letting you go. I'll leave you longing for that one voice That speaks through the crowds of songs, Yet knowing I was never meant to stay so long. I can be that one care-taker of tear-drops, Gently brushing them away with lucious lips That feel, to you, like velvet rose petals. Once you've felt my kindness and compassion for your soul, You'll find a friendship deeper than any that you've ever known. I can be one who is there for you. I can be one who can care for you. I can come to you whenever you feel that you need me. I can choose to never leave you longing. I can choose to stay where I am belonging. And I can kiss your eyes and sing you lullabyes With my one voice. Regardless of how you come to know me, I am still but one voice drowning in a crowd of songs. Heart-broken and tip-toeing, I long to touch you. Casting spells or painting rainbows, I will always be but one voice. ©1999 Erin Solari ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This is so great...I really love it. Your one voice speaks clearly and beautifully  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much, Caroline! And I must tell you, I love your signature! Very truthful! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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Emmy Member
since 1999-06-29
Posts 194KY |
Wow...aren't I jealous now that I don't have a UserName that I can write a wonderful poem about?!? Well done |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, Emmy! However, I do believe you can write a wonderful poem about your name, whether it be a UserName or not! And if/when you do, I would love to read it! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
So well written one voice.. Thanks for posting it.------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
~one voice~ this is brilliant!!! I absolutley love it. well done!! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written once voice. This poem is a very strong one. It shows both sides of your personality. I really enjoyed it, thanks for posting. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very well done indeed... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was well done! One voice in the crowd. Wow! Don't know what to say, you left me in thought! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You're one voice reached out to me. Isn't that what we are all doing reaching out..for assurance, confirmation etc of who we are and what we believe, and what makes us how we are.??? ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you all so much! I never expected this poem to get so much response! Thank you, thank you, thank you! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "She looked at her life like lines, never-ending, constantly forming, reforming and bending." |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I have replied to this piece privately but I feel the need to tell you again that your one voice is a choir. ------------------ Pain is life, life is short, I will endure. DreamEvil© |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and What a Voice you Have! Well done!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
One voice, I agree with DreamEvil your one voice sounds like a choir. You did a great job on this poem. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 yes! |
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