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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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The path of the future seemed so ominously dark, Clouded by gut wrenching, painful visions of loss. Splashes of glimmering ruby prematurely left their mark, As I silently contemplated what our tomorrow's may cost. As the blackness bled poison into the depths of my soul, I loathed the heavens above that bound me to such grief. Time began shredding my world, I felt it scratching below, And all I wanted was to fade away, to have eternal relief. The thought of loosing you engulfed my raw, heavy heart, For I had never known a love so joyfully vivid as this. Fate had planned us to be as one from the very start, But I feared the demons of change would destroy our bliss. Just when the pain had almost smothered my will for life, The clouds shrouding my vision broke to reveal twinkling light. A silent song spoke volumes, melting away the worst of my strife, And I know that whatever befalls us, we will survive the night. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Alwye, Nice job here expressing emotions of deep pain, glad you found survival to be close at hand. ------------------ Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...we will survive! |
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