Open Poetry #2 |
I love you to |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
I love you to She processes the mundane day. Into priorities. Shifting slot to slot the care not, Into categories. It is a calibration planned, A regimentation. Placing items is a time slot, For consideration. It is a good plan and it works, Doing things concisely. The day flies by in ordered form, Wrapped and done precisely. But I am not a memo slip, To place within a file. The kiss the peck the hello dear, Has lost its loving style. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Life gets too busy, and we get lost in the shuffle. Put on some music and ask her to dance in the middle of an afternoon File the memory under "things to do more often". Seymour I love your writings. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know I love your style, Seymour, and you got me again with this one. Monotony - the curse of relationships. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy is stupendous.... |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why not try a nice vacation -A grand romantic holiday Might do wonders for frustration -Just put the filing away!! ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, we all get defiled at one time or another. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Nan, Balladeer, caroline,dsnyder and severn, The anount of literature placed here is phenomenal I put this poem on before I went to sleep and found it half way down the second page this morning. This site is sometning else. But what I wanted to say is to be praised by my fellow poet is praise indeed. I thank you all a whole bunch. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And some of us had to work today! Imagine how much more there would have been if we were all home! ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I think when it gets to this it's time to break the rules and break the routine. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just want to say thanks dsnyder and Julie, breaking the rules does work, thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good one |
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