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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-09-05 09:57 PM


I love you to

She processes the mundane day.
Into priorities.
Shifting slot to slot the care not,
Into categories.

It is a calibration planned,
A regimentation.
Placing items is a time slot,
For consideration.

It is a good plan and it works,
Doing things concisely.
The day flies by in ordered form,
Wrapped and done precisely.

But I am not a memo slip,
To place within a file.
The kiss the peck the hello dear,
Has lost its loving style.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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1 posted 1999-09-05 10:14 PM


Life gets too busy, and we get lost in the shuffle. Put on some music and ask her to dance in the middle of an afternoon File the memory under "things to do more often". Seymour I love your writings.

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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2 posted 1999-09-05 10:34 PM


You know I love your style, Seymour, and you got me again with this one. Monotony - the curse of relationships.
Nan
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3 posted 1999-09-05 10:34 PM


Sy is stupendous....
Denise
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4 posted 1999-09-05 10:40 PM


Why not try a nice vacation
-A grand romantic holiday
Might do wonders for frustration
-Just put the filing away!!



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Denise

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5 posted 1999-09-05 10:41 PM


Sy, we all get defiled at one time or another.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 1999-09-06 08:41 AM


Dear Nan, Balladeer, caroline,dsnyder and severn,
The anount of literature placed here is phenomenal I put this poem on before I went to sleep and found it half way down the second page this morning. This site is sometning else. But what I wanted to say is to be praised by my fellow poet is praise indeed. I thank you all a whole bunch.

Denise
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7 posted 1999-09-06 08:55 PM


And some of us had to work today! Imagine how much more there would have been if we were all home!

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Denise

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
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Houston, TX
8 posted 1999-09-07 12:26 PM


I think when it gets to this it's time to break the rules and break the routine.

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Julie
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Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure.
Marianne Williamson

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
9 posted 1999-09-07 09:27 AM


Just want to say thanks dsnyder and Julie,
breaking the rules does work, thanks.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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10 posted 2004-04-23 03:37 AM


good one
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