Open Poetry #2 |
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I love you to |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla ![]() |
I love you to She processes the mundane day. Into priorities. Shifting slot to slot the care not, Into categories. It is a calibration planned, A regimentation. Placing items is a time slot, For consideration. It is a good plan and it works, Doing things concisely. The day flies by in ordered form, Wrapped and done precisely. But I am not a memo slip, To place within a file. The kiss the peck the hello dear, Has lost its loving style. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Life gets too busy, and we get lost in the shuffle. Put on some music and ask her to dance in the middle of an afternoon ![]() ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You know I love your style, Seymour, and you got me again with this one. Monotony - the curse of relationships. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sy is stupendous.... ![]() |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Why not try a nice vacation -A grand romantic holiday Might do wonders for frustration -Just put the filing away!! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, we all get defiled at one time or another. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Nan, Balladeer, caroline,dsnyder and severn, The anount of literature placed here is phenomenal I put this poem on before I went to sleep and found it half way down the second page this morning. This site is sometning else. But what I wanted to say is to be praised by my fellow poet is praise indeed. I thank you all a whole bunch. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
And some of us had to work today! Imagine how much more there would have been if we were all home! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I think when it gets to this it's time to break the rules and break the routine. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure. Marianne Williamson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Just want to say thanks dsnyder and Julie, breaking the rules does work, thanks. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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