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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-04 08:22 PM


what was i thinking
or dreaming so clear
why did i believe
i belonged here
was i ever really normal
did I fit in the perfect circle
life is pretend
it was my friend
i kept it close
because i didnt trust
now...now everything is rust
stain of me
stain of you
do we all feel the blue
it lives,breathes
reproduces
once..once i was new
not a gentle monster
not a change
just a weeping willow
ravaged by the rain



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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-09-04 08:27 PM


Ok, you know have a groupie on your hands......it's your own fault, for writing so good. Oh, did I mention I like your stuff? hee hee

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



ramisf
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since 2007-05-17
Posts 93

2 posted 2009-03-24 02:07 AM


Life is great... we need to know how, where, and for what we are living it.... we need to set a goal and work hard to get it
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