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If I had dragon wings
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If I had dragon wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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If I had dragon wings I'd hover o'er the why of things If only I had dragon wings. I would fly in a thoughtful muse And give the things that all could use. I'd be the giver and tender Reigning ruler and pretender. Season the cauldron with good taste Eliminate the awful waste. I'd ring out war and ring in peace. I'd make each gender sign a lease. And blow on them with fires cruel If they did not obey the rule. I'd hold a court for every need And listen well to every plead. For those that lie they'd pay a toll A piece of their eternal soul. I'd make the stars rain wished on things, If only I had dragon wings. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
again Bravo ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Ohhhhh this was awesome. Makes me wish I had thought of this and written it! Luv Izzzzzzzy |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like Utopia!! Great one Seymour! (but that's no real surprise!) ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wouldn't it be wonderful if we could solve all the worlds problems? I like this one |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Well, if we can't have a real utopia, we can at least find it in your writings, I think.  good job------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all the above you have my love, each comment offers a moment. Which to me is sheer enjoy. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, as you know, I've read a lot of your poetry and this is, by far, the best thing you've written, in my humble opinion. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Seymour, this is just wonderful! It is a smile from beginning to end. ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Great one! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Your humble opinion is good enough for me. Caroline and Sue, So glad you both enjoyed the poem. thank you so much. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Yeah Sy......  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Why thank you Nan, that looks just like me. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Well written Sey, Great job.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Moonmoon, Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
were do you get them from.. its great not to sure about the last two line's though! I'd make the stars..etc |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was cool...I am a fan of dragons anywayz!! I enjoyed it very much!! Thank You!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
U K Hero and Justblue, Thank you so much for the read and comments. As I said before when I put a poem to sleep I like to be the last to tuck it in goodbye. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"If only I had dragon wings." You've earned your wings, Sy In Memory...  M |
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