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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-09-04 09:53 PM


if i was wonderful as you
i wouldnt fear mirrors
i would love my reflection
i could walk down the road
and never be told which way to go
and if i was as great as you
i could make a woman smile
never live with denial
laugh my troubles away
maybe if i was special like you
i would never play the fool
follow all their rules
but im not all the above
and i cant bear my face
live life as the disgrace
so im wishing to be you
special wonderful great you
its never meant to be
ill always be just me
worthless forgotten me



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Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
1 posted 1999-09-04 09:56 PM


Dark. Mournful, but impressive......I can relate.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Tyke
Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26
Calgary, Alberta, Canada
2 posted 1999-09-04 10:07 PM


Science and medicine can do wonders for the body but it can't cure the heart nor the mind that has been broken by the beauty of a women. you express your thoughts well, even if its a little deeper than some of us want to go.
ramisf
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since 2007-05-17
Posts 93

3 posted 2009-03-24 02:12 AM


wonderfull is what you wrote
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