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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
if i was wonderful as you i wouldnt fear mirrors i would love my reflection i could walk down the road and never be told which way to go and if i was as great as you i could make a woman smile never live with denial laugh my troubles away maybe if i was special like you i would never play the fool follow all their rules but im not all the above and i cant bear my face live life as the disgrace so im wishing to be you special wonderful great you its never meant to be ill always be just me worthless forgotten me ------------------ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Dark. Mournful, but impressive......I can relate. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
Science and medicine can do wonders for the body but it can't cure the heart nor the mind that has been broken by the beauty of a women. you express your thoughts well, even if its a little deeper than some of us want to go. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
wonderfull is what you wrote |
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