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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 1999-09-03 03:30 AM


Soar with me
Take my soul within your own
Hasten not, but savor
The sweet flavour within a
Once broken chalice,
Mended by patience
Fear not my hand
Outstretched, to you
Soar with me
Souls intertwining, changing,
Always touching
Drinking the tears of our fears
Yield up the night
As I wrap the stars around you
Journeying ever onward
Soar with me
Worry not, the future
Tomorrow’s promises
Dreams away
Ride the wind with me
O’er the moors
Light on the air, as the skies
Sing in harmony with
The dulcet sound of
Your soul, within mine own

© Copyright 1999 Nicole Williams - All Rights Reserved
INclan
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since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024
Indiana, USA
1 posted 1999-09-03 05:24 AM


I am yours...Lets soar! I liked it!
Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas
2 posted 1999-09-03 06:40 AM


For such adventurous musings would I eternally yearn, and with patience true wait my turn.
Beautifully moving poem, Satiate, as is the soul which created such.


Alicat

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

3 posted 1999-09-03 08:16 AM


My heart lifted in song when I read this slice of your soul. As I know you, my spirit soars with yours and I watch you climb higher everyday. Thank you for giving of yourself.

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Life is pain is poetry, at least I'll be productive.
DreamEvil©


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
4 posted 1999-09-03 09:12 AM


Wow, this is just so beautiful, I felt myself floating, flowing, relaxing through your journey. Thanks for sharing.

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Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
5 posted 1999-09-03 10:21 AM


Satiate,
Reads good to me.
Enjoyed the ride.

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
6 posted 1999-09-03 12:08 PM


Thank you all. Was feeling the need to release some pent up feelings.
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
7 posted 1999-09-03 02:59 PM


Satiate, you did good, girl! Free verse always works for me when I need that release! Beautiful! I love it!

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~onevoice~

"She looked at her life
like lines, never-ending,
constantly forming,
reforming and bending."



Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
8 posted 1999-09-03 03:26 PM


hehehehe...thanks girl!
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2004-04-23 03:33 AM


touching
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