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Comtesse de Chamillart
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0 posted 1999-09-04 08:05 PM


A severed hand...
A twisted soul...
An inkless pen...

A rotting memory...
Spoiled words...
A cluttered mind...

Lucid silence...
An evening lost...
Writer's Block...

©1999 TheComtesse


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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~

© Copyright 1999 Comtesse de Chamillart - All Rights Reserved
Saxoness
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1 posted 1999-09-04 08:07 PM


Beautiful Comtesse! (may I call you that?) You have a way with words. (imagine that from a poet, lol)

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Denise
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2 posted 1999-09-04 08:12 PM


So much truth with so few words! Very good!

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Denise

Poet deVine
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3 posted 1999-09-04 08:43 PM


I know whereof you speak! This is so true! I hate sitting here with nothing working for me! Good poem!!!!
Comtesse de Chamillart
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4 posted 1999-09-04 08:47 PM


Thanks to all of you! I was just sitting here wondering what to write about, and that came out! lol Thanks again!

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~

hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-09-04 08:58 PM


Very well stated, not a wasted word amoung them

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-09-04 09:04 PM


Extremely excellent word selection. Welcome!
Comtesse de Chamillart
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7 posted 1999-09-05 01:41 AM


Thank you very much!

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~

Wesley the Blue
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8 posted 1999-09-05 01:45 AM


Very nice work M'lady. I have been plauged with "The Block" all of my life. You put it into words so well.
Comtesse de Chamillart
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9 posted 1999-09-05 05:50 AM


Thank you so much again! Your replies mean so much to me!

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~the Comtesse de Chamillart~

Michael
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10 posted 1999-09-05 06:07 AM


Writer's Block - and yet you manged to put it to words so gracefully.

Wonderful job.

Michael

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