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Back With A Vengeance
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Back With A Vengeance |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Back With A Vengeance You said that you loved me That you always would So I gave you my heart And all that I could How could I have known That you weren’t sincere You were just playing games And you weren’t playing fair You told me you loved me I believed what you said I shared all my dreams Then shared my bed You told me you’d call But the weeks went on by The phone remained silent And I asked myself why Now you’ve come back around With “love” on your mind And tons of excuses Why you left me behind Boy you better watch out Better listen to me I won’t play the fool Just you wait and see I’m back with a vengeance My lesson is learned Hell has no fury Like a woman scorned ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hoot, A women scorned and a women wronged. Enjoyed the read. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hoot, I really enjoyed this. Well done  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
YOU GO HOOT!!!  Don't let 'em play games with you. I get so sick of that "coulda, shoulda, woulda" syndrome. If weeks go by before a man calls, disconnect him. A guy told me once when I got mad, that Hell seemed like a safe place to hide...*LOL* ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thank you Seymore, Dark Angel and caroline |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
I hope that rat gets to read this and learns a lesson. Keep your spirits high and the poems comming! |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Atta-girl! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, hoot! Excellent, as usual! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Denise and Sue...thank you very much Wolfgang...thanks, but I've found with people like that they have no sense of guilt...seeing this poem would do nothing. Thanks for your encouragement though. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good! A good poem and a good lesson. Men can be creeps! (Not the ones here of course..poetry writin' men are a different breed!) |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So, Ms. deVine, you say these poetry writing men are a different breed? Where did they come from?  You go, Hoot. Give him what he deserves and maybe more!!! I liked this-too bad he won't change if he sees this, but who really cares? What goes around comes around. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
You go girl!!!! Stand up for yourself, and don't take (well you know) from anyone!!! Great job!! |
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Tyke Junior Member
since 1999-08-22
Posts 26Calgary, Alberta, Canada |
Hoot - very strong words. I don't think I've ever been scorned by a women, but if the responses to your wonderful piece of literature is any indication I think I'll find a cave just incase the need should arise. I think the female populous is getting ready to tar and feather the male carcasses out there. Still a well done piece of work. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet, Elizabeth and Whtdove, thank you all for your kind words Tyke...unless you're a dog like this guy, I don't think you really need to hide out |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet, Elizabeth and Whtdove, thank you all for your kind words Tyke...unless you're a dog like this guy, I don't think you really need to hide out ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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