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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-09-29 08:12 PM


Dream Gazing

Of dreams unended
and expounded upon
scattered across
our canopy of thought
collected together
as constellations connected by
a shared reality
in view of achievements
from followed dreams
wished on like falling stars
burning brightly into the imagination
of the collective consciousness.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-09-29 08:23 PM


Your style is very unique, I like it and I like the suttleness of your messages

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It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-09-29 08:25 PM


Yes, I like this style too. Very nice piece.

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Denise

suicidal dreams
Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA
3 posted 1999-09-29 08:25 PM


good style. your poems are all interesting.

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life is short kill quick

RobertB
Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
4 posted 1999-09-29 09:26 PM


gosh...I thought I had no style being a self-taught poet. I learned the hard way. Thanks you guys I really appreciate your comments.

RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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5 posted 2004-05-30 04:01 AM



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