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Three Days Dead |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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Three Days Dead Well, I've been dead for three days now, Won't someone roll the stone away? I've got to find my Femme, somehow, I can't take this another day. My house is as dark as a tomb. Within my life there shines no light. Waiting here in the cold and gloom For her return to make it right. I sit here at my computer, Every two minutes checking mail. I've been holding my breath for her, My life, a sigh, awaits exhale. I haven't ate, nor slept, indeed, I may have well forgotten how. Without her touch, I lie in need. Well, I've been dead for three days now. ------------------ Michael Anderson Loneliness isn't in being alone; Loneliness is alone in being. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 09-29-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Michael... I used to look forward to weekends, count the days till my freedom and live for Friday afternoons... now I see them as a time of silence. *G* Hope things work out for you and Femme! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I hope she's back soon Michael |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Michael? I remember a few years ago, telling this co-worker of mine that was fooling around with this nut, that she ought to be more careful or she'd end up pregnant by this idiot. She told me that that wasn't a concern cuz she was uterusless......I told her I was too at the moment...my wife was outta town. (Not to be confused with "Eweterless"..Balladeer's loneliness during shearing season),,,,,,,,Great poem pal....shows alotta feeling! [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Hoping your "life' returns soon! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
aww Michael.. she'll be back.. (I miss her too)  |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Very heart-felt, Michael. I hope she returns to you soon. Who could stay away?? Take care. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Been there, still there, done that, doing it yet again. I understand my friend. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Hate it when my browser burps. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I know just how you feel, I work 4 and am off 3...it feels like living in 2 completely different worlds, and I am the only link... great poem! [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-29-1999).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Amazing what effect they have on us. The weaker sex? I think not. Hang in there, Michael. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hang in there Michael, my friend. She'll be back soon. But I know that feeling too, turning on the computer and hoping he/she is there... ------------------ A hero is a man who does what he can. ~Isis~ (The Fragile Rose) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Love can be quite agonizing. Hang in there! ------------------ Denise |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Michael: She'll be missing you as much as you are missing her.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Well stated and a great title. I like how it flows and the the echo of the first and last lines. Most enjoyable read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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