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fazewon
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since 1999-09-28
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0 posted 1999-09-28 06:41 PM


time as seamless as the night sky
binds me to a place where love keeps passing me by
streams of thoughts keep asking the question why
do I sit and wait for someone whose already decided my fate
living my life in some type of dream like state
where my loneliness is transformed into an inner peace
as I watch the world spin out of control
I look to the sky for a place to call home
the sky's the limit but deep inside me is infinite
travelling a little further day by day
my questions are answered as the night turns to day
with the realization this is my only way.


© Copyright 1999 fazewon - All Rights Reserved
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 1999-09-28 07:39 PM


Fazewon: If you believe in fate, then yes, our paths are already mapped out, we just decide on which road to take..

and because my humour can't resist, thank heavens we don't come across a roundabout when we feel like this or we'd be extremely dizzy...LOL

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
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In the space between moments
2 posted 1999-09-28 08:58 PM


Beautiful work, fazewon. Welcome to the Passion Family of Phenomenal Poets! I will be looking for more!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Denise
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3 posted 1999-09-28 09:28 PM


Very lovely. Don't be in a rush to find your 'Love'. Everything comes in its own time! Well done!

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Denise

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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4 posted 1999-09-28 09:44 PM


Fazewon, beautifully done.. There is a special someone for all of us.
And welcome to our little village!!..:..

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



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