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Come To Me My Love
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Come To Me My Love |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Come To Me My Love Oh come to me my love tonight Come back to me in dreams That I might live Take from me all that is my own Lend forth your hand That I might give Oh come to me my love today Compared to you the sun Its presence dim Whisper my name into my ears Sung from your lips, your words Are like a hymn Oh come to me once more my love Through miles and time and space Please flee to me Break all these bonds we have known Hold me in your arms tonight And set me free Oh come to me my love right now Space and time will be no more No moon or sun Bounds are lost, miles disappear Nothing left but you and I As we are one To Tyson, my inspiration, my muse ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What emotion you have packed into this one, hoot. Excellent! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
hmmm, this is beautiful, like a soft song whispered in the night. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Another wonderful creation Hoot! Very nice! ------------------ God gave you two ears and one mouth...so you should listen twice as much as you talk. |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
No, Ruth. Thank YOU. Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Balladeer...thanks, I'm glad you could feel the emotion Tara...what a beautiful comment...thank you Whtdove...thanks once more Tyson...Te etes mon amour, mon lumie`re, mon force, et mon comprenant. Je suis rien sans vous. ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Maybe I should just stop writing, and let you say my words for me ruth! Beautiful.. Chris |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh Christopher...that indeed would be a loss to the literary world, but thanks for the compliment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wonderful, Hoot!!  |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Beautiful....soft, gentle.....the words falling like a gentle rain. ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hoot....great job as usual.....I wrote one kinda like this yanno? Come to me my love, Do not hesitate I am not funky Please be mine Let our hearts entwingle Like honeysucker Jump around me Scuff my boots Fingerpoke at me Skippy-Toe by With owl-growls And Fa-la-la's Love with me All your grits As I love you Yassee? I can be serious too yanno! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
another lovely Hoot....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Beautiful, Hoot. It sings....really. A wonderful tribute. And Toe, geesh.....you never stop....LOL |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Thanks everyone for your comments about this one...another of those I was unsure about before posting...I'm glad you all liked it, makes me feel better about it Toerag....you serious...very seldome, but I love your humor |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
this is beautiful hoot, will have to echo tara on this one, its like love whispered on the winds to reach a love far away..... and toe, just loved that skippy toe thing, what a picture of pure bliss lolol |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Hoot: This was terrific but I don't think I've read anything of yours that wasn't excellent.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL.... whether love whispers and glides into our dreams or skippy-Toes with owl growls... it's grand! *G* [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Lady Hoot: A fool he would be, to be anywhere else with words spoken as these. |
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