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counting poems in my sleep |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
counting poems in my sleep last night i slept fitfully if at all remembering you in poetry form. writing poem after poem to you in my head, when i should have been asleep. wonderful as they might have been, now with the morning light, they are all gone, my heart empty, my head aching, not a poem in sight. would that i could write you back into my arms ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful, Lovey!  |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well not as interesting as John Elway *big grin* but same tossing and turning effect I guess....lol thanks friend |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ILoveit: Yep, counting words sure beats counting sheep...ooops HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! And I know what you mean about composing poetry in your head when you should be sleeping! But it's such fun though isn't it? ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This poem is REALLY well done. I've done that and I've made that same final wish. Great job at expressing it. |
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[email protected] Junior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 36Whitesboro,NY,USA |
Sounds like a discription of my nights.Sometimes all the poetry in the world couldn't make up for having the one you love,because the real poetry is life.Sometimes there are no words that could come close to one moment of truth and life and love. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
WONDERFUL!!! This was really well written...I love it!! |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Another great spurt Lovey ... Pardon my ignorance but who's John Elway ? Pssst, my English is lousy but in the last stanza shouldn't it be "wish that I could ..." ? |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Very nice, my friend :-)Have wished the last line often myself !JTF, I think John Elway is a n athlete...perhaps hockey or baseball, maybe basketball...I am sports-disabled LOL |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Thanks all! Rainbow girl yep lol, think I will leave the sheep alone loldsnyder...sigh, yes it sure is Balladeer, yep, guess its the poets lament, no matter how great a poet you are, you still can't "write" someone back ...sigh...thanks Mark, exactly, glad you liked it hoot...coming from you, that means a lot, love your poems too! JTF, well, John Elway, I think he is or was a quarterback for the Denver Broncos...now, as to why he keeps auntie awake, guess you are gonna have to ask her on that one lol and nope, the senitiment of the last line is stronger than wishing, it means if there were anyway possible that I could do it, then for certain I would.... and beki, thanks, and LOL@sports disabled, I know what you mean, but with me its directions, I call myself directionally disabled...and I always thought of it as a bad thing, but a friend of mine and I were talking and he said maybe I was just adventurous..... I like that better than being disabled lol[This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lovey: From the depths of my heart, with greatest sincerity.... :-)~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
oh and if you knew how that just made me ROF&GMAO you would stick it back in lololol big hugs, and I just love your sincerity ....sheesh I almost believed it.... *big grin* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I found this back here...where are you? |
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