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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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How come you let me in She was on your mind She is the one you love I saw her in the shadows I felt her on your heart You and me could never be i ran away I fell back inside myself To where I keep safe Waiting alone For the only one Who knows where is heart lies Right inside of me ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well, unfortunately this hits close to a fear I hold in my heart, but still would like to say that it is very well written, conveys the feelings well  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Iloveit!! This was a fear that became reality!! "HE" says that I let the fear overpower me!! Maybe so!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
This is a good heart felt piece of work!!! I also would like to take the chance to say thanks for the two great replies to my poem it's 12:20, and rain is falling. I really liked the magic lady with wand in hand. Just keep in mind that it is because of lifes experiences, hurts, and even heartbreaks, and our determined creativity that lead us to create these beautiful works, instead of using them to self destruct. They are our fuel, and our passion. Richard 33 |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And I wonder how often this really happens... "How come you let me in She was on your mind" ... all too often I fear. Well written bleu |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well done - Justbleu, well done. Like the signature btw. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This is so true. Don't we tend to coil back and hide in ourselves. Very well done! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You both Severn and Whtdove!! Justbleu |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
"How come you let me in" Because you are the one "She was on your mind" As are all of my close friends "She is the one you love" She is like a sister to me so, yes I do love her "I saw her in the shadows" Watching me to protect me from myself "I felt her on your heart" She has been on my mind "You and me could never be" Because it should be we "I ran away" And I have been waiting "I fell back inside myself" Come on back out "To where I keep safe" I will keep you safe "Waiting alone" No one should be alone "For the only one" I can be that one, if you like "Who knows where is heart lies" I have seen where my heart lies "Right inside of me" Right inside of you Not many of you know who I am besides another poet on this site but if you ask Justbleu, I hope that she will tell you who I am besides just another poet. Part of her screenname was given to her by me. ------------------ "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You!! Made me feel special, even if just for a moment!! ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
That's a pretty hard act to follow, so I guess I'll just say congratulations to you both for finding each other.... I think I may have to stop coming round here...just too depressing to see all these happy happy romantic people finding each other...sigh..... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You better stay around Miss Beki!!! What would we do without your poetry around here?? Thanks!! Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Justbleu.....I loved your reply to Scorched...how romantic......oh, I love to see love in full bloom ------------------ Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same. Thank you all for leaving footprints!! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hoot Thank You as always... Justbleu |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
sigh....I love a happy ending or should I have said....a new beginning..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Pepper!!! [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).] |
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searchingsoul New Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 4Paddock Lake, Wi.USA |
justbleu thats was so well put, how often, sad but true this happens. I'm glad that you finally found the happiness you were looking for, gives hope to others,, great poem |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
This is straight from a film script!  I'm very happy for you both!! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hey Justbleu, I liked this. Very nice. Thanks. Tyson |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lots of smiles for your new beginning. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You everyone for all of your wonderful thoughts!! It means a lot!! Some dreams may only last a second!! But, at the present time while something is happening it can bring up the most wonderful feelings in the world!! If only such feelings could last always, forever and................... Justbleu ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this is sad, but so beautiful |
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