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Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 1999-09-22 04:40 PM


How come you let me in
She was on your mind
She is the one you love
I saw her in the shadows
I felt her on your heart
You and me could never be
i ran away
I fell back inside myself
To where I keep safe
Waiting alone
For the only one
Who knows where is heart lies
Right inside of me

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



© Copyright 1999 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
1 posted 1999-09-22 05:47 PM


well, unfortunately this hits close to a fear I hold in my heart, but still would like to say that it is very well written, conveys the feelings well
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
2 posted 1999-09-22 07:56 PM


Thank You Iloveit!!
This was a fear that became reality!!
"HE" says that I let the fear overpower me!!
Maybe so!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
3 posted 1999-09-22 08:40 PM


This is a good heart felt piece of work!!!
I also would like to take the chance to say
thanks for the two great replies to my
poem it's 12:20, and rain is falling. I
really liked the magic lady with wand in
hand. Just keep in mind that it is because
of lifes experiences, hurts, and even
heartbreaks, and our determined creativity
that lead us to create these beautiful works,
instead of using them to self destruct.
They are our fuel, and our passion.

Richard 33

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration
4 posted 1999-09-22 09:18 PM


And I wonder how often this really happens...
"How come you let me in
She was on your mind"
... all too often I fear.
Well written bleu

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
5 posted 1999-09-22 10:38 PM


Thanks!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-09-22 11:23 PM


Well done - Justbleu, well done. Like the signature btw.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
7 posted 1999-09-23 12:03 PM


This is so true. Don't we tend to coil back and hide in ourselves. Very well done!
Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
8 posted 1999-09-23 12:37 PM


Thank You both Severn and Whtdove!!

Justbleu

White Wolf
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since 1999-09-18
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
9 posted 1999-09-25 11:49 PM


"How come you let me in"
Because you are the one
"She was on your mind"
As are all of my close friends
"She is the one you love"
She is like a sister to me so, yes I do love her
"I saw her in the shadows"
Watching me to protect me from myself
"I felt her on your heart"
She has been on my mind
"You and me could never be"
Because it should be we
"I ran away"
And I have been waiting
"I fell back inside myself"
Come on back out
"To where I keep safe"
I will keep you safe
"Waiting alone"
No one should be alone
"For the only one"
I can be that one, if you like
"Who knows where is heart lies"
I have seen where my heart lies
"Right inside of me"
Right inside of you

Not many of you know who I am besides another poet on this site but if you ask Justbleu, I hope that she will tell you who I am besides just another poet. Part of her screenname was given to her by me.

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"Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 1999-09-26 01:45 AM


Thank You!! Made me feel special, even if just for a moment!!

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
11 posted 1999-09-26 04:16 AM


That's a pretty hard act to follow, so I guess I'll just say congratulations to you both for finding each other....


I think I may have to stop coming round here...just too depressing to see all these happy happy romantic people finding each other...sigh.....

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
12 posted 1999-09-26 10:44 AM


You better stay around Miss Beki!!! What would we do without your poetry around here??
Thanks!!

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"




[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
13 posted 1999-09-26 10:59 AM


Justbleu.....I loved your reply to Scorched...how romantic......oh, I love to see love in full bloom

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
14 posted 1999-09-26 11:03 AM


Hoot Thank You as always...

Justbleu

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
15 posted 1999-09-26 11:06 AM


sigh....I love a happy ending or should I have said....a new beginning.....

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
16 posted 1999-09-26 11:21 AM


Thank You Pepper!!!


[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 09-28-1999).]

searchingsoul
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 4
Paddock Lake, Wi.USA
17 posted 1999-09-26 01:23 PM


justbleu
thats was so well put, how often, sad but true this happens. I'm glad that you finally found the happiness you were looking for, gives hope to others,, great poem

graham
Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60
South Yorkshire, England
18 posted 1999-09-26 03:25 PM


This is straight from a film script!

I'm very happy for you both!!

johnt300
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since 1999-09-12
Posts 214
san diego, ca.
19 posted 1999-09-27 08:11 AM


Hey Justbleu, I liked this. Very nice. Thanks.
Tyson

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
20 posted 1999-09-27 01:17 PM


Lots of smiles for your new beginning.

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
21 posted 1999-09-28 10:50 AM


Thank You everyone for all of your wonderful thoughts!! It means a lot!! Some dreams may only last a second!! But, at the present time while something is happening it can bring up the most wonderful feelings in the world!! If only such feelings could last always, forever and...................

Justbleu

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart"



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
22 posted 2004-04-18 02:20 PM


this is sad, but so beautiful
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