Open Poetry #2 |
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Garden Cycle |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Garden Cycle Young rabbits at play stop to nibble my daisies - my wife laughs out loud. Garden butterfly alights on the last poppy - first breath of autumn. Harsh serrated wind, rain slices the icy air - one white blossom tries. Two fledgling sparrows practice baby flight-steps - the roses smile. Copyright 1999 ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent combination of haikus. Well done. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm in that garden in your words ![]() |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks, friends. This poem was published in last July's Snakeskin, a british journal...my first international publication! :-) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
movin on up..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! and love your signature line too! |
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