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zipknee Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 35Oak Park, IL |
the past is past but yet it still encompasses me surrounds me like a shroud clouds of remembrance floating like a heavy fog around me blocking the view ahead untouchable, unmovable, lingering always haunting |
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Kelly Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 145 |
Very very well done. I really like this. It's short and yet it says it all. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Not a single wasted word....it speaks volumes although short |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Zipknee, Good one I like it. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ZipKnee~ Very enjoyable read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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