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A Response For My Inspirer
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A Response For My Inspirer |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Through your ever silent touch, evolves my truthful means to be. Not just of the breath...or the sense of moving limbs (God Given?)- No, but the will and courage to feel. Vapid? Never! Joy's gift, these words I love, grown brighter with your 'voice' inspiring- I'm forced. Full. Collect myself! Forgetten where I am! So lost. What flame is this? A cliche so appropriate, it explains it most, This sweet impossibility, it's true. Existing where our worlds meet... Conflict! But never bitterness, so usual in colliding views... In heartfelt awe, I'm found, by the strength of demonised prose. Such sagacity...I never (repetition) dream to match. I'm only coloured glass...turning round, afraid to settle- Yet, still, I rest. If one valid point is ever to surface... Then gossamer wings we possess. Chains? Gone. we are free. I found you on the earth, yet among the stars you are. Shine on. 20.9.99 KM |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Delightfully done, dear Lady! I'm sure he will enjoy being an inspiration to you.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Now I am the one who is wordless. How can I respond to that, other than to say that perhaps there exist more than only our demons, as long as you join me among the stars. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Exquisite piece, Severn Well done. Michael |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh Severn....you sure have a magical way with words...... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Severn, I agree reading your stuff sometimes is like partaking of a magic spell or something else equally as wonderful!! ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautifully written! I always like to put 'art' with my poetry but yours has painted a picture of its own here!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...and am smiling here, another of the Passions couples exposed ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
(blushing a furious shade of crimson) Whatever are you talking about Ruth??? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I knew it - I knew it....!!!! Golly, I'm good! I witnessed them "debating" quite some time back, and immediately knew she'd stolen him from me !!!! Tis true, tis true, and what a powerful team they are ! Like bianary stars.... Exquisite piece my dearest Severn ! Beauty as always in your words.....isn't this quite a trip? Hey, if you need to borrow my "bug spray", well, never mind that...it's too late ! he he he Wasn't using mine either that day I bumped into Michael....  ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Indeed PFF, she "pounced" upon me whilst my back was turned! Believe me though, twas no lacking on your part! Michael is indeed a lucky man as he well knows! But, soulmates aren't chosen, they simply are. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Dear me, now I'm the one who's blushing. Thankyou all so much! Femme - I don't really want that spray... My inspiration - your invitation is so gladly accepted. x several million. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
See what I have to put up with??? She has to keep on trying to beat me, when we both know full well that I always win. And I can prove it in a single statement: I have her. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow!!! What a way with words there!!! Very nice!! ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" Justbleu |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Ah Christopher, but I have you - so what are we going to do? Just like true and false statements perhaps we cancel each other out! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Au contrair mi amour, perhaps then we confirm one another. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Touche. (Just one!) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I found you on the earth, yet among the stars you are. Shine on. I love this line the best! Maree "little miss understood |
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