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responsive haiku (written with TH)
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responsive haiku (written with TH) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
TH: the music of love a symphony of Spring they play our song Beki: we play our own song concerto for pen and ink love's wonder our beat ************** Flesh and blood, I am every moon you've tried to tame - I will be your poem. ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Beki, I like what TH: said but is it a form of haiku? Yours I understand and it is the season of "LOVE." Enjoyed the read. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks everyone. Seymour, TH and I were having a lengthy exchange about what haiku was and wasn't when we wrote these this past summer...I suppose his could be considered haiku, he did after all mention Spring :-) |
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