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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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0 posted 1999-09-27 12:32 PM



Before I journey on to the happy ones,
There are a few more intolerable one's I care to expand on,
Judgements, opinions whatever we call them,
For the bearer the pain may last long.

Racism, is one I can't abide,
Judging someone by their colour,
Eew he's Chinese don't want to know him,
Never glimpsing the possibilities inside.

Being judged by the way one looks,
She's too fat, too ugly or thin,
Again cos of the Judgement it's probable to say,
You'll never see the beauty within.

Picking on anyone for any number of reasons,
What does it achieve,
Look past the outbody and what you see,
In their heart and soul believe.

FOR CHRISTOPHER WANTED TO ADD THOSE COUPLE, I'LL DAY A HAPPY ONE TOMORROW I PROMISE. WHAT DO YOU THINK MY FRIEND?

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A hero is a man who does what he can.
~Isis~
(The Fragile Rose)



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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-09-27 09:04 PM


Another list of important things Isis!
I really liked the line:
"Look past the outbody..."
Great way to express it!

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