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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-09-26 09:39 PM

Amber deeply emblazons an emerald vision,
Autumn brilliance painted upon the breeze.
Beauty dances with the early morning sun,
Flooding through dark, jewel toned leaves.

Boundless skies are feathered creamy white,
As fingertips of blue touch this vast meadow.
By your side I embrace the perfect sight,
And nurtured by our touch, true love does grow.

The flight of time seems so distant here,
Almost as if for us, the world has stilled.
I feel so complete when you hold me near,
A glance into your eyes and my soul is filled.

If love were a vision, it surely must be this,
Amber softly brushed upon deep emerald leaves.
Upon my soul, you have left your tender kiss,
And now my heart dances upon the painted breeze.

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

Denise

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1 posted 1999-09-26 09:45 PM

Absolutely beautiful! I enjoyed this. And autumn is my favorite time of year too!

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Denise

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2 posted 1999-09-27 08:21 AM

Beautiful.....this flows so smoothly and is filled with wonderful imagery

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Some people come into our lives and quickly go. Some stay for awhile and leave footprints in our heart and we are never ever the same.

Thank you all for leaving footprints!!

Alwye

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In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-09-27 09:51 PM

Thank you both very much. This was a real event I experienced a few days ago and I wished to capture it.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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4 posted 1999-09-27 10:42 PM

Well done again my wayward friend.

I'm glad you chose to write about your experience.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Alwye

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In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-09-28 08:41 PM

Thank you, my dear Friend.

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Dark Angel
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6 posted 1999-09-29 09:43 AM

Alwye, absolutley beautiful

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Mystic Essence
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since 1999-09-29

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7 posted 1999-09-29 10:23 PM

Alwye, my friend, this is a wonderful piece. I can truly see your vision, for I've been there myself. I too love fall. Great great work!

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